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README.md

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 ## apxtri  Decentralized Autonomous Organisation (DAO)
 
-You are here on the tech side, to understand under the wood how it works and how you can contribute to this tech journey.  
-See [apxtri web site](https://apxtri.crabdance.com) how to create a new social world with apxtri.
+Welcome to the technical side of apxtri, where you'll learn how it works and how you can contribute. Visit [apxtri web site](https://apxtri.crabdance.com) to discover how to create a new social world with apxtri.
+
 
 ## apxtri Architecture: a quick view & keywords definition
 
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 *   **the XBE coin** is the token that drive the blockchain, it materialises an exchange value and is a conterpoint
 *   **a git apxtri** is a package ready to install a town by a mayor into a physical server that will be able to join a nation (mean accept thoses nation rules). You can also create a nation and stay alone or not. Then mayor will be able to host druid request to create tribe. Then druid will invite pagan to join his tribe...
 
-All actors will have the same target to respect contracts and are free to leave or to stay into a nation, a town or a tribe. If a contract is not fair, then a nation, tribe, will be empty mean not creating value mean die. Only fair rules will survive but any try will rewards actor with XTRIB coin.
+All actors will have the same target to respect contracts and are free to leave or to stay into a nation, a town or a tribe. Unfair contracts lead to empty towns, tribes, or nations, resulting in no value creation. Only fair rules will survive, rewarding actors with XTRIB coins.
 
 ```plaintext
 /town-nation/                          tribe sapce
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 To start you need to 
 
-*   setup your network and for production a Domain Name server and a SSL certificat to your IP town
+*   setup your network and for production a Domain Name Server (DNS) and a SSL certificat to your town's IP
 *   setup your machine by installing snap, nginx, nvm, npm, node
 
 As a mayor, you have to understand what you are doing, your numeric reputation is in the game. Always check sources before downloading any things. For dev use town name: **dev** and nation name :**ants** 
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 $ sudo passwd {apxuser}
 $ sudo usermod -aG sudo {apxuser}
 $ sudo visudo
-# add the next line in the file 
+# Add the following line to the file:
 $ {apxuser} ALL=(ALL) NOPASSWD: ALL
-# exit and save
+# Exit and save, then switch to the new user:
 $ su {apxuser}
 ```
 
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 ```plaintext
 $ sudo vim /etc/hosts # add 127.0.0.1 dev-ants
-# Then after "Machine" install, open in your browser http://dev-ants
+# Open http://dev-ants in your browser after installation.
 ```
 
-if you use chrome change settings for CORS for dev chrome://flags/#block-insecure-private-network-requests  change to disabled  
-
 FOR PRODUCTION: 
 
-You need a domain name, to get a free one [http://ydns.io](http://ydns.io) create one like apxtri.ydns.io that content your IP adress the get your url update something like [https://ydns.io/hosts/update/Tl7FDQAETmQre312edztgsI](https://ydns.io/hosts/update/Tl7FDQAETmQre312edztgsI)[Uy](https://ydns.io/hosts/update/Tl7FDQAETmQre312edztgsIUy)
+You need a domain name. To get a free one, visit [http://ydns.io] and create one like apxtri.ydns.io that contains your IP address. Then, update your URL with something like [https://ydns.io/hosts/update/Tl7FDQAETmQre312edztgsI](https://ydns.io/hosts/update/Tl7FDQAETmQre312edztgsI)[Uy](https://ydns.io/hosts/update/Tl7FDQAETmQre312edztgsIUy)
 
 ```plaintext
 # Into your production machine
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 ```plaintext
 $ sudo apt install git vim libcap2-bin p7zip-full p7zip-rar curl nginx
-# Install last nvm** (check website to get latest v0.xx  from https://github.com/nvm-sh/nvm)
+# Install the latest version of nvm (check the website for the latest version: https://github.com/nvm-sh/nvm)
 $ curl -o- https://raw.githubusercontent.com/nvm-sh/nvm/v0.38.0/install.sh | bash
-# close and re-open terminal under apxuser
+# Close and re-open the terminal under the apxuser
 $ nvm --version
-# if nvm not found then  cc paste 3 last line : export NVM_DIR= ....
-# and recheck nvm --version
-# Install node/npm/yarn in general follow the directiv they gave online to update properly the config
+# If nvm is not found, copy and paste the last 3 lines of the installation script: export NVM_DIR=....
+# Then recheck the nvm version
+$ nvm --version
+# Install Node.js, npm, and yarn. Follow the online instructions to update the configuration properly.
 $ nvm install node
-$ node --version #to check
-$ npm install --global yarn 
-$ yarn --version
-# Find a non existing town to join to an existing nation see https://apxtri.crabedance.com
-$ mkdir ~/apxtowns # if it does not exist 
+$ node --version # to check the Node.js version
+$ npm install --global yarn
+$ yarn --version # to check the yarn version
+# Find a non-existing town to join an existing nation. See https://apxtri.crabedance.com
+$ mkdir ~/apxtowns # if it does not exist
 $ mkdir ~/apxtowns/{town}-{nation}
 $ sudo chown {apxuser}:root /etc/nginx/nginx.conf
 #################################
-# For dev #######################
+# For Dev ###############
 #################################
 $ mkdir ~/apxtowns/{town}-{nation}/adminapi/
 $ cd ~/apxtowns/{town}-{nation}/adminapi/
 $ git clone https://gitea.ndda.fr/apxtri/apxtri.git
 $ yarn install
-# to setup run the 1st time
-$ dns=apxtri.ydns.io user=apxuser yarn dev 
+
+# Set up and run for the first time
+$ dns=apxtri.ydns.io user=apxuser yarn dev
+
+
 
 #################################
 # For production  ###############